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Memorial to the Murdered Jews of Europe

Berlin.

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:iconitneverends:
Ya... Stelenfeld... one of the most interesting and famous monuments to visit and photograph! :)

This shot is a bit more different then the common Stelenfeld shots. It's not the perspective but it's for example the white light which comes from the sky and even reaches the end of the line.
The light also creates a peaceful ambient in between this monument when you look at the brilliance of the stones.
The other thing is that I usually don't see a shot of Stelenfeld when there's snow and ice on the ground. It just adds some nice details to this image.
One thing I would try to improve is to really stand in the middle of this "corridor" while doing the shot. I notice a little dislocation. ;)

Overall a very nice photo!
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That's just a beautiful picture. One of those pictures which are hard to give critique on. Nearly everything on this picture is perfect.
I really like the colors. Great how it goes from a real dark blue to a orange or yellow and finally to white. I don't know if it's stone or iron (sadly never been there) but it looks gorgeous how it fades away a bit in the back.
I also like the icy floor. At first view you think it doesn't match to the rest of the picture but if you have a closer look you see that it makes the picture perfect.
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:iconanukis:
I like the kind of never ending feeling I get from this picture. Good job :).

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:iconpurification:
A beautifully moving piece. very emotive. I like the overexposed sky in contrast to the stark black of the memorial.
:iconkilmekisme:
I love this photo... it has so much emotion in it. I enjoy the persepective of it as well, especially how you feel like the monument never ends. I love how it is in black and white as well. This is an excellent photo with many emotions and memories! Good job!
:iconkphil:
Siehte cht etwas endlos aus, sehr schön =)
:iconhotarubaku:
Yeah it was a shame that happened you know.

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CJ: Would you adopt me X3?
Max: i adopt what i can see infront my eyes ;3
CJ: hehe *walks and rubs aganist max* master *licks him and nuzzles*
Max: stop call me master xDD
:iconntiberius:
I really love this photo and the feeling that it emanates, it can make you think about many things.
Good work! Hope to learn from people like you!
:iconmetavoid:
mmmmm i love the intensity of feeling this generates, it's very ominous.

*favourite*

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"Dead? No. I just hurt my back, I'm not dead."
"What are you then?"
"I'm alive."
"Then what are you doing here?"

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[my gallery]
:iconirin-mae:
it's beautiful in a lonely way.

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na nanananana na na
nana na nana na

katamari.// D:
:iconwildclosed:
Wow such a powerful meaning behind it! awesome!

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January 29, 2006
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Jan 28, 2006, 10:10:32 AM

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